Thursday, March 31, 2011
Favorite song
My favorite song is So Bad by Eminem. This song is 5mins and 25sec long. It is on his newest album Recovery. A lot of the song is really easy to remember. All the songs on recovery are really good and just as good as So Bad so really all the songs on Recovery are my favorite songs. All the songs on recovery are... Cold Wind's Blow, On Fire, W.T.P., Going Through Changes, Not Afraid, Seduction, Space Bound, Cinderella man, 25 To Life, Almost Famous, You're Never Over, and Untitled. Every single song on this album is very good, but because it is Eminem there is a lot of swears.
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
Personal Metaphor
Authors note: This is a Personal Metaphor created in class in writing circles.
I am a new mechanic who just got there first car to work on.
I am Dave Mirra when I go off a jump on my bmx.
I am Viktor Reznov when I'm in war in CoD: WaW
I am Eminem when I listen to rap.
I am a new mechanic who just got there first car to work on.
I am Dave Mirra when I go off a jump on my bmx.
I am Viktor Reznov when I'm in war in CoD: WaW
I am Eminem when I listen to rap.
Thursday, March 24, 2011
To Sit in the Sun
What would do if your brother had been ill for years and your whole family was upset and then… he died and everyone was crying for days and even weeks, this is what happened in the story To Sit in the Sun by Joanna Leyland. This wasn’t a very good story because of how short it was and how confusing it could be. I believe that this story wasn’t good at all because of the somewhat non-confusing and lack of understanding.
With the length being really short it made the story very bad with the fact that it wasn’t something that I normally would read because I only like books with guns, killing, or just some sort of action. With the story not being that I thought that it would be somewhat good but it was horrible. While the brother was ill and then he died was confusing because it talked about their dad and there dog but later it said that their brother was the one that had passed away. With all the confusion in this story there was some non-confusion that was still confusing in a way that made me not like this story.
With the non-confusing parts that were still a little confusing was while the brother was dead the family that lived next to them was just one old lady that didn’t like the moaning and the crying. But the sister of the dead brother that never had the name said was asking the old lady if she would check on the body. She replied that she would, and that was a little weird to me. The old lady went to look at the body and she told the little girl about the body and she sad that it like to Sit in the Sun.
This was one of the worst stories I have ever read and I don’t recommend it to anyone. This story was bad because you couldn’t really understand it and there were only a couple parts that I actually understood a little. This was a horrible story about a boy who died, a family that was very sad that their son died and an old lady that looked over the dead body.
With the length being really short it made the story very bad with the fact that it wasn’t something that I normally would read because I only like books with guns, killing, or just some sort of action. With the story not being that I thought that it would be somewhat good but it was horrible. While the brother was ill and then he died was confusing because it talked about their dad and there dog but later it said that their brother was the one that had passed away. With all the confusion in this story there was some non-confusion that was still confusing in a way that made me not like this story.
With the non-confusing parts that were still a little confusing was while the brother was dead the family that lived next to them was just one old lady that didn’t like the moaning and the crying. But the sister of the dead brother that never had the name said was asking the old lady if she would check on the body. She replied that she would, and that was a little weird to me. The old lady went to look at the body and she told the little girl about the body and she sad that it like to Sit in the Sun.
This was one of the worst stories I have ever read and I don’t recommend it to anyone. This story was bad because you couldn’t really understand it and there were only a couple parts that I actually understood a little. This was a horrible story about a boy who died, a family that was very sad that their son died and an old lady that looked over the dead body.
Wednesday, March 16, 2011
Favorite Childhood Memory
I believe that my favorite childhood memory was when I got x box live. When I got my own account on x box I was so happy. I would originally always play on my brothers account and I don't think he liked that because his friends didn't like me playing and so when it was my birthday my brother made an account for me while I was at school because he was already home from school. When he got home he made an account for me and that was the best birthday present ever.
When he made it the gamer tag was YOUNGBUCK50C. I thought it was cool then but after a month the live ran out and I had to make a new account and start all over again in all the games I have played. The gamer tag that I chose was really dumb but I have changed it about 5 times from it. The one I first chose was IM GHOST12369. From there I went to Tyson Rios AO2. After that I had US M1A2 ABRAM. from there I went to F4TfULxXxS4Lm0N that one was a good one for a wile 'till I went to GHETTOxBOMBER. That didn't last long and from there I went to my current one which is qXxEMIN3MxXp. That is my favorite one I have chosen and I don't believe I will change it again.
From having x box live it has made me the x box gamer I am today. I have had x box live for 1 year and I don't chose on loosing it. Even though I am a gamer I still hang out with my friends, do good in school, and I do all the things a person that doesn't have an x box would do. But in the game that I play the most which is Modern Warfare 2 I am the highest prestige you can be which is 10th prestige and almost level 70 (the highest level to get to). I am 10th prestige level 65. That is why getting my own x box live account is my favorite childhood memory.
When he made it the gamer tag was YOUNGBUCK50C. I thought it was cool then but after a month the live ran out and I had to make a new account and start all over again in all the games I have played. The gamer tag that I chose was really dumb but I have changed it about 5 times from it. The one I first chose was IM GHOST12369. From there I went to Tyson Rios AO2. After that I had US M1A2 ABRAM. from there I went to F4TfULxXxS4Lm0N that one was a good one for a wile 'till I went to GHETTOxBOMBER. That didn't last long and from there I went to my current one which is qXxEMIN3MxXp. That is my favorite one I have chosen and I don't believe I will change it again.
From having x box live it has made me the x box gamer I am today. I have had x box live for 1 year and I don't chose on loosing it. Even though I am a gamer I still hang out with my friends, do good in school, and I do all the things a person that doesn't have an x box would do. But in the game that I play the most which is Modern Warfare 2 I am the highest prestige you can be which is 10th prestige and almost level 70 (the highest level to get to). I am 10th prestige level 65. That is why getting my own x box live account is my favorite childhood memory.
The Gun Want
The gun that I want is a M-200 Intervention because it is my favorite gun and it is the sniper that has the most accurate far shot. It is an American sniper rile and it has a magazine that holds 7 rounds. It is a bolt action and is used today. It's barrel is about 235cm long and that is from the end of the barrel to the end of the scope.
Tuesday, March 15, 2011
Another day at the Bus Station
After the bus station was destroyed form explosives they re-built it because it was a very nice place to go and get a bus ride or hang out with your friends. When it was blown up there was one survivor that no one knew about. He was the leader of the robbers. He was Caucasian and named Frank. Not one person felt bad once they found out that he was in the explosion. He was hated by everybody in the world, even his mother. When he was found to be alive all destruction broke loose to get him dead. Everyone in the town got M4's and AK's and other guns just to kill him and he only had a desert eagle. The towns people found him and he shot his only shot and he missed. they shot and hit him and killed him and then the people were happy again.
Wednesday, March 9, 2011
End of the Line
What would you do if you and your twin brother had just saw the first telephone in town and you wanted to call someone, then noticed that it was five cents a call and you don’t have any money? This is what happens in the story End of the Line by Alison L. Randall. When I read this I thought that it was a very good western story because I like western and all the horses that they rode on and the old guns. Although we are way past western time this western story was very good and exciting because of the action that happened in the story and the wanted man who didn’t like other people in his mining area.
With all the action that happened with the Western time I believe that this was a great story to show that. The story End of the Line was good because the action that happened during the sight of the telephone because Liza wanted to make a phone call and she had no money. When Liza and her brother Frank were walking home they saw rocks for sale and that gave Liza the idea to find crystals and sell them to use on the phone. When she goes to find a rock she went into a mining area of a wanted man. He didn’t like that so he tied them up and left them in a cave. Frank got out and then helped Liza out, and they turned in the wanted man for money and got enough for the phone. While the action was great the wanted man was a very well described person.
Zedekiah Smith was the mining man and a bank robber that was well described because the story stated that they were dressed for riding, with leather chaps and spurs and had a mustache that hung past his jaw. Zed was very wanted for robbing banks and killing people. After Liza took a crystal rock he found Liza and Frank and tied them and put them in a cave then left. Liza and Frank got out and turned Zed in and got enough for the phone. Frank spent his half of the money on candy and Liza was going to spend it on the phone but she realized that everyone she knows doesn’t have a phone so she spent it on candy too.
That is why I believe that even though we are way past the old west I believe that this is a great story because of the action and the wanted man named Zedekiah Smith. The old west was a very long time again but there are still very good old west books and movies. While our time has a lot of electronics the old west is still told about today.
With all the action that happened with the Western time I believe that this was a great story to show that. The story End of the Line was good because the action that happened during the sight of the telephone because Liza wanted to make a phone call and she had no money. When Liza and her brother Frank were walking home they saw rocks for sale and that gave Liza the idea to find crystals and sell them to use on the phone. When she goes to find a rock she went into a mining area of a wanted man. He didn’t like that so he tied them up and left them in a cave. Frank got out and then helped Liza out, and they turned in the wanted man for money and got enough for the phone. While the action was great the wanted man was a very well described person.
Zedekiah Smith was the mining man and a bank robber that was well described because the story stated that they were dressed for riding, with leather chaps and spurs and had a mustache that hung past his jaw. Zed was very wanted for robbing banks and killing people. After Liza took a crystal rock he found Liza and Frank and tied them and put them in a cave then left. Liza and Frank got out and turned Zed in and got enough for the phone. Frank spent his half of the money on candy and Liza was going to spend it on the phone but she realized that everyone she knows doesn’t have a phone so she spent it on candy too.
That is why I believe that even though we are way past the old west I believe that this is a great story because of the action and the wanted man named Zedekiah Smith. The old west was a very long time again but there are still very good old west books and movies. While our time has a lot of electronics the old west is still told about today.
Wednesday, March 2, 2011
Death by Scrabble
Death by Scrabble
What would you do if you were 42 years old hated your wife and had nothing to do but play scrabble? You hated your wife so much you wanted to kill her. This is what happens in the short story Death by Scrabble by Charlie Fish. If you hated your wife and the only thing to do was play scrabble with her would you quit and never play that game again. I believe that Death by Scrabble was one of the best short stories that I have ever read.
This was a great short story because of the way that Charlie Fish had written it and the words he had used for the story. During the game of Scrabble that his he and his wife were having he went first and was glad that he was winning because she hadn’t gone yet. Then when it was her turn she was winning from the placement of the word she played. She played the word JIXED and from there on out everything that they played would come true. He had a habit of chewing the pieces. With how Charlie Fish had wrote the story like that really got my attention. With how he wrote that got my attention the game and what he thought and played was great two.
The way that Charlie Fish had written this was great and was very deadly because the main character only wanted to kill his wife. While they were playing he played the word BANG and the air-conditioning blew up. He also played HOT and he got really warm. While they were playing the whole time he was thinking of words to put that would symbolize that he wanted to kill her. Towards the end of the game he played the word CHEATING and from that word he cheated when he placed that word. While she was getting tea he swapped one of his letters so he could make the word CHEATING. At the end of the game he had a “B” in his mouth and he played the word QUAKE and then immediately she placed DEATH and an earthquake started and pushed the “B” down his throat and got stuck and he died.
This is the reason that I believe that this was a great short story and was well written other than the part of the main characters didn’t have names they were called his wife and him. Death by Scrabble was written as a narrative so the male main character was called I or myself. That is when I thought that Death by Scrabble was one of the best and most likely is the best short story I have ever read.
What would you do if you were 42 years old hated your wife and had nothing to do but play scrabble? You hated your wife so much you wanted to kill her. This is what happens in the short story Death by Scrabble by Charlie Fish. If you hated your wife and the only thing to do was play scrabble with her would you quit and never play that game again. I believe that Death by Scrabble was one of the best short stories that I have ever read.
This was a great short story because of the way that Charlie Fish had written it and the words he had used for the story. During the game of Scrabble that his he and his wife were having he went first and was glad that he was winning because she hadn’t gone yet. Then when it was her turn she was winning from the placement of the word she played. She played the word JIXED and from there on out everything that they played would come true. He had a habit of chewing the pieces. With how Charlie Fish had wrote the story like that really got my attention. With how he wrote that got my attention the game and what he thought and played was great two.
The way that Charlie Fish had written this was great and was very deadly because the main character only wanted to kill his wife. While they were playing he played the word BANG and the air-conditioning blew up. He also played HOT and he got really warm. While they were playing the whole time he was thinking of words to put that would symbolize that he wanted to kill her. Towards the end of the game he played the word CHEATING and from that word he cheated when he placed that word. While she was getting tea he swapped one of his letters so he could make the word CHEATING. At the end of the game he had a “B” in his mouth and he played the word QUAKE and then immediately she placed DEATH and an earthquake started and pushed the “B” down his throat and got stuck and he died.
This is the reason that I believe that this was a great short story and was well written other than the part of the main characters didn’t have names they were called his wife and him. Death by Scrabble was written as a narrative so the male main character was called I or myself. That is when I thought that Death by Scrabble was one of the best and most likely is the best short story I have ever read.
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