Authors note: I am writing to improve on the organization with adding quotes in my writing.
If Roger hadn’t tried to take her pocket book he wouldn’t have gotten fed, had his face washed and gotten the ten dollars. If he hadn't fallen over/or not even try to take it he wouldn’t have gotten anything from Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones. If could have run away with her purse he most likely wouldn’t feel good about him self, he wouldn’t have had anything to eat, and his face would stay filthy. Because she held on to the bag, he did get food, his face washed, and ten dollars for his blue sued shoes.
Friday, January 27, 2012
Thursday, January 19, 2012
The Big Wander
Clay and Mike are on a voyage– hoping to find their uncle Clay lost in the desert. Will they ever find him? This is an adventurous non– stop page turning great adventure book written by the author who wrote Bearstone and much more.
Thursday, January 12, 2012
Obi Developed
Authors note: This is to be graded on the reading rubric for the Character Development section.
Not every character in a story is the same; Michael Obi is a new Headmaster at a school. He was kind of a show off that he thought that younger people can be smarter than older people because he came into the school and was younger than all the teachers and he was smarter. He was a guy that was cocky, arrogant and a little selfish. He was a man that had many emotions. He was excited that he got that job, but he was also mad that he noticed that people were going though school grounds for the fun of it he thought. But after he closed that path, he got both mad and sad because the school grounds were ruined. But the day after he closed it he had those feelings because of the school and that somebody died because they couldn’t get through the path.
Michael Obi was a good man. But when he didn’t like something he changed it and that ruined his satisfaction. He then became a more humble man and didn’t do anything to something that wasn’t his. He was a man that used to get his way sometimes, but after what happened I believe that he will change because something that meant a lot to him was ruined because of one little thing that he did that turned from a little thing into a really big problem.
Not every character in a story is the same; Michael Obi is a new Headmaster at a school. He was kind of a show off that he thought that younger people can be smarter than older people because he came into the school and was younger than all the teachers and he was smarter. He was a guy that was cocky, arrogant and a little selfish. He was a man that had many emotions. He was excited that he got that job, but he was also mad that he noticed that people were going though school grounds for the fun of it he thought. But after he closed that path, he got both mad and sad because the school grounds were ruined. But the day after he closed it he had those feelings because of the school and that somebody died because they couldn’t get through the path.
Michael Obi was a good man. But when he didn’t like something he changed it and that ruined his satisfaction. He then became a more humble man and didn’t do anything to something that wasn’t his. He was a man that used to get his way sometimes, but after what happened I believe that he will change because something that meant a lot to him was ruined because of one little thing that he did that turned from a little thing into a really big problem.
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