Authors note: I am writing to improve on the organization with adding quotes in my writing.
If Roger hadn’t tried to take her pocket book he wouldn’t have gotten fed, had his face washed and gotten the ten dollars. If he hadn't fallen over/or not even try to take it he wouldn’t have gotten anything from Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones. If could have run away with her purse he most likely wouldn’t feel good about him self, he wouldn’t have had anything to eat, and his face would stay filthy. Because she held on to the bag, he did get food, his face washed, and ten dollars for his blue sued shoes.
I like how you made your connections to the book. Something that you could work on would be how long and the word choice used. Other then that I thought you did well on making connections.
ReplyDelete